The Color of Thunder was the first book I ever completed. (It's not the first book I ever wrote, but that's a topic for another time.) I began writing it after I had a dream about part of the storyline. I was pregnant with my daughter when I began the task, but it wasn't until she was nearly 11 years old that I decided to finish it.
The book was titled Shades of Gray when I first started writing it. It was begun in Colorado, but when I picked it up again we were living in North Carolina. By then E.L. James had found huge success with her erotic romance novel, Fifty Shades of Grey. My novel then became the Color of Thunder, but the title was not
the only thing I changed about the book.
After my husband went through and read
part of the manuscript with my new edits he declared that I was not the same
writer I’d been when I’d begun the project twelve years before. After reading and
rereading I decided that I agreed with him. It became obvious that the whole novel needed to be
rewritten.
Our family made another move at
the end of 2011—this time across the Pacific to a small town named Linden in
southeast Germany. It is here, nearly a
year after our relocation, that I finally finished The Color of Thunder. I published it through Xlibris Publishing,
and it was introduced to the public on December 18, 2012.
I was completely inexperienced and thought that I needed to
do everything on my own. I had not yet been introduced to the amazing indie
author community, and didn’t know how important and helpful beta readers could
be. I was still oversensitive about feedback, particularly of the negative kind,
and relied only on the editing skills that I had gained through a couple
previous jobs I’d had working in the publishing industry.
The finished product turned out
beautifully. Xlibris took the photo I gave them, (one I'd taken myself) and turned it into an
amazing cover. The text layout is perfect, and I’m incredibly proud of it. The Color of Thunder was my first “baby”,
and because of that, it will always remain one of my favorites…but after working
hard to improve my editing skills, (I now work as an editor for Booktrope Publishing
and am in the process of starting up Wing Editing, a family owned editing business)
I realize that The Color of Thunder
could use a bit of polish. I’ve also published two more novels since my debut
release, and I have found my place among many other
indie authors. I’m ready to give the Color
of Thunder the make-over that it truly deserves.
I love the storyline for this
novel. I’m also quite fond of all the characters. None of this will be changed.
I’m just going through with an editor’s eye to clean, tighten, tweak and
perfect what is already there. I hope to have the new and improved Color of Thunder ready for release near
Christmas of this year. I present to you chapter one. I hope you enjoy.
Chapter One
1946
The summer I
turned six, a stranger showed up in our church, changing our lives forever. For
better or for worse, I'm still not sure. One thing I'm absolutely certain of,
though, is that things were never the same for us Linsey's after that hot and
airless June afternoon.
Jackson
Mississippi was still a small city back in 1940, the year I was born, although
it was anxious to get bigger. It was called "Chimneyville" for a
time, right after the Union forces burned it to the ground during the Civil
War, leaving nothing but the chimneys of houses standing among the debris they
left behind. Few antebellum structures still stood in my home town to represent
the city's historical past, but, unlike the houses and shops that had once been
built, one thing endured the test of time. It was an entity many years older
than the twisting Pearl River, or the Choctaw Indians who had once inhabited
the fertile land. It was God. God had been there in Jackson, long before
Mississippi became the Magnolia State, before General Andrew Jackson gave his
name to our fair city, and before Elvis Presley was born in Tupelo 200 miles
northeast of the capital.
As a daughter of
the local pastor, I had first-hand knowledge of the man upstairs and knew that
my father had a close and personal relationship with him. My unshakable belief
was that he was everywhere and in everything. He was all powerful and all
knowing, and there wasn't anything I could say or do that wouldn't get back to
him in one way or another. In my head this pertained to both God as well as to
my father.
I couldn't imagine
a time when there wasn't a First Southern Baptist Church. In truth,
construction of the building began in the early 1900's. Its doors were opened
for the first service in the spring of 1920 by my grandfather, Isaiah Linsey
and his wife, Ruth right before my father turned two. Outside, beneath a tall,
proud spire that shot straight toward the clouds hung a placard with my
grandfather's name on it. Twenty some years after Isaiah's death, my Daddy
became the pastor of First Southern Baptist. A new sign was hung, one with the
name Jacob Linsey painted on it in precise black letters. It was small enough
that it didn't overshadow the graceful lines of the building, but large enough
to be seen clearly from the other side of Cherry Street on which our church had
been built.
Year after year
hundreds of pairs of feet traipsed up the three steps that led to the portico
of our church and into the entryway beyond. Those same feet carried our
parishioners into the long gathering room where candles burned, their flames stuttering
in the hot, humid air that found its way through the front doors. No matter
where a person's eyes fell there was something to be seen inside the building.
There were long rows of cork board lining both walls dotted with flyers for
such events as a Saturday morning bake sale, weekly reminders for prayer
groups, and sign-up sheets for the bimonthly gathering of the ladies quilting
bee. Artwork done in thick lines of waxy Crayola's decorated the walls, and in
the third week of July, the projects completed during Vacation Bible School
were proudly displayed there. Just before Easter the long gathering room was
filled with potted lilies, and for most of the month of December, holly was
woven into the wreaths of pine that hung on the double entry doors and along
both walls. Tendrils of red velvet ribbon looped and fell from the top of each
green circle, trailing down like untied apron strings moving silently, fueled
by the bodies of the congregation stirring within the friendly space. This was
the feel good part of the church, the place where everyone smiled as they
greeted one another. This was Mama's domain, a place where children were not
told to hush, and where we ate the remains of our Sunday School treats before our
faces were scrubbed with tissues moistened by the spit of our mothers.
I loved the
gathering room, but I had mixed feelings about the sanctuary. It was
undoubtedly the biggest and most important room in our church, and controlled
singularly by my father. The ceiling loomed high above our heads, and my
father's voice sounded thunderous and frightening as he preached, everything
that came from his mouth hovering heavily above us before tumbling down around
our heads and shoulders. Jacob Linsey wasn't a large man, but he dominated the
expanse of the sanctuary as though he were ten feet both tall and wide. The
only muffled sounds I heard during services were those of waving fans, swinging
feet, the creak of a pew beneath tired back sides, and the quiet, almost
imperceptible noise of patience being strained for too long a time.
It was my habit to
look, not at Daddy, but at the window that towered behind him. I would study it
after I took my place on the front pew beneath the pulpit as if each time was the
first time I'd ever laid eyes on it. The stained glass had been pieced together
on the eastern side of the sanctuary where the morning light hit the serene
scene of Jesus in a flowing gown, his arms cradling a white lamb while more of
the flock gathered and slept at his feet in the greenest of grass. The sky
arched above him, the brilliant blue falling in strips of heated light down
onto the white of my father's shirt. It flowed like liquid over him and onto
the walls and wooden floor of the sanctuary. Roses the shade of fresh blood
dotted the pasture in which the sheep lay, and together those colors fell and
shimmered around the room like a warm prism. On days when the sun did not shine
the window seemed cool and lifeless. I would slump against the hardness of the
pew beneath me and swing my feet until Mama pressed her fingers against my shin
and told me without words to be still. All the while my father's voice chased
itself in the echo of the big room.
On this muggy
morning, the day the stranger appeared, the air was so still not a single leaf
moved on the branches of the trees outside. The men in our congregation filed
out of the sanctuary after services holding their suit jackets while their
wives moved the damp fabric of their Sunday dresses away from their sweat
soaked backs. Children were ruddy faced and cranky, eager to be outside on the
swings in the side yard.
Mama bounced my
sister on her hip in an effort to keep her quiet. Hope was round from every angle,
from the dark ringlets that surrounded her head, to the chubby feet Mama always
stuffed into black Mary Jane's. Her arms and legs were soft like dough, and the
fingers on her hands were dimpled. Even her mouth was shaped in a cherry red
circle as she peered over at me, strands of her hair stuck to the sides of her
sweaty face.
"I'm going to
go and say good-bye to everyone now, Faith," Mama said moving past me and
toward the center aisle. "I sent Luke after Mr. Henry. He won't be but a
minute. You go on and find him now, you hear?"
She had quit
looking at me even before she'd begun speaking, her eyes looking toward the
doors of the sanctuary and the line that was forming in the gathering room.
"Yes, ma'am."
Hope's head bobbed
over Mama's shoulder as my mother made a hasty retreat. About half way down Mama
slowed as the stranger moved to meet her. He paused and smiled, a dark hat held
in one hand as he offered my mother his free one.
"Good afternoon,
Mrs. Linsey," he said. She gave him one of her prettiest smiles before she
reclaimed her hand and moved to the task of caring for Daddy's congregation.
I turned and
walked to the end of the pew, my shoes sliding across the wooden floor as I
moved to sit in the second row. The scrolled edge of the polished bench in
front of me fit nicely in my rounded fingers as I watched this man I had never
seen before. Knowing everyone who spent time in our church was an important
part of being the pastor's family, and I'd been on many social calls in my short
life. At six I could not recall the names of each one of our congregation
members, but I knew faces well enough to remember if I'd seen them in services
before. I knew which children belonged to which grown-ups, who had been in
constant attendance, and those that had been missing from church in recent
weeks. This gentleman was a newcomer and I was curious about him.
Daddy poured some
water from a pitcher Mama kept filled for him during his sermons. His eyes
closed as he filled his mouth with water. He swallowed a glassful then filled
it a second time.
"That was a
terrific sermon, Pastor Linsey," the stranger said in a clear voice.
Droplets of
moisture clung to the coarse, dark hairs of Daddy's mustache. His eyes found
and stayed on the other man's face and a smile lifted the corners of his mouth.
"Glad you liked it," he said with an approving nod. "Don't
reckon I've ever seen you here before. Glad to have you."
The man smiled and
creased the brim of his hat in his hands. "This is the first time I've had
the pleasure of visiting First Southern Baptist, but my boss has been here and
he was right when he said that I'd like your preaching."
Daddy put the
glass next to the half empty pitcher and descended the steps that led to the
center aisle. His left foot came down first, then the cane he used to walk with
hit the floor before his injured leg followed. He moved his hand over the
buttons of his shirt and the colors from the stained glass window caught and
reflected in each one them. "Your boss?" he asked. "He a member
of our congregation?"
The man shook his
head. "No, sir, but he did speak to you a couple weeks back. His name is
Marcus Landry. He's the owner of WCOL radio right here in Jackson. He'd heard
about your church and thought he'd come for a visit. He liked it so much he
sent me out."
The colored heat
inside the room had grown heavy. I rubbed my nose against the back of my arm
and blinked, feeling the sweat on my eyelids cool for a moment beneath the
spinning ceiling fan hanging above me. Dust motes floated through the air,
sluggish as if even they were too hot to move any faster.
"Marcus
Landry," Daddy was saying, his eyes pulled up and to the right as though
he were searching for a memory he'd stored there. "Ah," he said with
a nod. "I do remember him as a matter of fact. He's Cecelia Crawford's
brother."
"Yes,
sir," the stranger confirmed. "And I'm Phil Michaels." My father
took the man's hand and gave it a vigorous shake. "I'm the program
director at WCOL and we're interested in your message, sir. We'd like to hear
some of it go out over the air waves as a matter of fact. Both Mr. Landry and I
think what you have to say would make some very fine program material
indeed."
"Do you
now?" Daddy responded, a tone of interest in his voice.
I remained still
as my brother plopped down beside me, his hot leg pressed against my own. He
nudged me with his pointy elbow. "Look what I got," he whispered
opening his fist and showing me two shiny dimes nestled in his palm.
"What are you
showing them to me for?"
"Got them
from Mr. Henry," he informed me.
Luke had rubbed
his blond curls away from his forehead and they stuck up at an odd angle away
from his face. One of his big front teeth was growing in crooked, giving the
smile he presented a lopsided tilt.
"Children,"
Mama admonished in a loud whisper from behind us. Both Luke and I looked back
and she motioned for us to come to her. " Out with you. Now."
Luke turned to me
again, his freckled nose nearly touching my own. "Want to get some ice
cream?" he asked.
I nodded and felt
his hand wrap around my arm. He pulled me down the center aisle and out of the
sanctuary, the stranger and his black hat all but forgotten in the time it took
to cross the length of the gathering room and out into the blazing hot sunshine
beyond.